ode to my nan

Does this sound ok to read in church?


Nan

We sat and watched you for a while
With tearful eyes we tried to smile
Knowing that it would be our last
We'd think of memories from the past.
Although its time for you to go
There's something that I want you to know
You're now our angel up above
Sunshine skies filled with love
With manicured nails and painted toes
You'll help us out with all our woes.
You fought long and hard with all your will
But now its time to be with bill.
Now your at peace its good to say
We'll live to fight another day
So now its time to say goodnight
Because we know the time is right.
In memory of a Mother, Sister, Nan and friend
Time will heal and hearts will mend.

This poem's OK for your Nan as long as your Granddad died before her, and as long as he was named 'Bill'

If not, change, "But now its time to be with bill" so that it ends with the name of your grandfather.